OSDS 5: "...Never Leave You."

[silverdoll14]

Title: ONE SENTENCE DRABBLE SERIES 5: “…Never Leave You.”

Genre: AU, Angst, Romance, Slice of Life

Rating: PG-13

Pairing:  Naruse Ryo/Ariake Koichi

Author: Me 

Length – Words: Drabble – 100 words each

Author’s notes: Well, well... I dunno what to say... But then I just ended this like this. I... I did cry writing this you know... I even looked like an idiot since I was in a coffee shop when I made this three drabbles. *sniffs* 

Oh well... next drabble will be from maru_sei's prompt and it will be an Uke!Ohno and Seme!Nino (and probably my first time...) and seeing the words, it will be the longest drabble series I'll write for now (12 words?). Honestly, I'm still not confident how... Never mind, but definitely it will be a bit rated. 

Comments and criticisms are highly appreciated.

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5. Never

Ryo looked up trying to meet Koichi’s eyes after stating everything out in the open. There was a side of him that accepted if the other pushed him away but another side pleaded to be rescued and be cocooned by the cook’s arms.

The stillness of Koichi whose back was facing him scared him and he didn’t know what to do anymore until…

 “I love you Ryo… and nothing can change that…” Koichi said, facing the lawyer with a smile, beautiful and genuine.

Ryo’s heart eased for he was saved by Koichi in ways no one can or can understand.

6. Leave

Koichi savored each moment time permitted them that afternoon, his scent, his smile, everything about Ryo that he could remember while lying down on his futon in each other’s arms. And when he woke up alone when the night was young, he knew that was the last time he would see the lawyer.

“Nii-chan…” Shi handed him a parcel as soon as he went down to the restaurant. It carried a neatly written letter and a broken harmonica.

Without care, Koichi broke down in his sister’s arms after reading a few words.

“Koichi, I’m sorry…. And, thank you for everything.”

7. You

Watching the endless vast of the ocean, the soft breeze caressing his skin like soft hands familiar and warm, Koichi relaxed as a black butterfly flew gracefully to his view. With a smile, a single tear was shed without sorrow but rather with bliss.

“… I don’t regret anything now and never will.

…In next life or maybe in another, I could finally say this promise I intend to keep… without restrains I’ll say, ‘I promise I will never leave you.’ like what you did for me, not with words but with your actions. 

You have freed me, my angel….”

Comments

[ninochan-saikou.livejournal.com]

Huwaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
Ryo left..... Huuu.....
But the last sentence was the one who made me feel so sad.
Ryou gave Koichi the broken harmonica?! Wow... 0.0
I'm sure 0hm1y4_L0v3 will love this, wherever she is...

Thank you for writing this <3

[silverdoll14.livejournal.com]

I really hope so...

You're welcome and thank you for reading this until the end... XDDD

[racanai.livejournal.com]

Noooo! T-T
But that's just how Maou ends, ne? And despite it being sad, I had to laugh since Koichi became Shiori! XD

[silverdoll14.livejournal.com]

yeap... hahahaha~ I kinda did made it that Nino is Shiori... LOL~

thanks for reading until the end... XDDD

[platinum28.livejournal.com]

;__________;

Just when I thought they were going to have another chance together... T______T It's heartbreaking.

Thank you for sharing though. :") I hope you have one with a happy ending hanging around here somewhere~

[silverdoll14.livejournal.com]

hahahaha, gomen... i'm a angst author though I do write fluff drabbles theses days so hope it can compensates my my angst ones...

you're welcome and thank you for reading too until the end XDDD

[carey-chan.livejournal.com]

it`s so sad T__T but Im still thankful that you sticked to the characters and their stories. I think I`ll skip the next series cause I`m not fond on uke!ohno but I promise I´ll be back afterwards ^,~

[silverdoll14.livejournal.com]

Yeah... I was planning actually to change it but then glad I stick to the original plot...

I'm not really fond of uke!Ohno too but it's good to try sometimes... I won't force you so see you next time then?

Thank you for reading XD

[maru-sei.livejournal.com]

*sob*
That's just so sad... But Ryo entrusted his precious harmonica.. :'(

[silverdoll14.livejournal.com]

Yeah... sadly I have to end it like this...

Thank you for reading until the end...

[mina-sweet-chan.livejournal.com]

Uwa ! Saad !
I'm crying. T_T
By the way, I don't see Maou's end yet. But Ryou is not dead or something like that ? (in your end and in the drama end ?)

[silverdoll14.livejournal.com]

Eh, you haven't saw the end of maou? You might cry buckets of tears if you will... get ready your tissues I warn you... *sniffs*

Thank you for reading until the end...

[mina-sweet-chan.livejournal.com]

Well, the day I will see it, I will tell you. I will tell you how much I cried and all XD
(Because I know I will cried)
And the same for Ryuusei no Kizuna. I am at the second last episode.

[himitsu-17.livejournal.com]

T____________________T

It was beautiful ~
But so sad T__T

Thanks for sharing!
The letter in the end was just o.o Beautiful~

[silverdoll14.livejournal.com]

Wow, glad you like it...

you're welcome and thank you for reading until the end too... XDDD