I don't think it's failed, because it's nice and understandably and really sweet :D Though I feel like thinking the 1st pov was Nino's, but the 2nd made me thinking it's Ohno's, at the mention he heaved the other closer and securing him in his arms.. I imagine Ohno hugging Nino.. so sweet.. Thank you so much for sharing! (^ ^)
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Date: 2011-08-17 02:18 am (UTC)Though I feel like thinking the 1st pov was Nino's, but the 2nd made me thinking it's Ohno's, at the mention he heaved the other closer and securing him in his arms.. I imagine Ohno hugging Nino.. so sweet..
Thank you so much for sharing! (^ ^)