http://silverdoll14.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] silverdoll14.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] silverdoll14 2011-08-14 12:44 pm (UTC)

Oh, it's an open POV. It could be Nino's or Ohno's POV... and then at the last part it's already 3rd person. It say how the man in the dark found his enlightment... hehe, sorry if I confused you. But if you're really confused, I actually imagine it as Ohno's POV and Nino was his light when I wrote it... haha~ Really, gomen for confusing you...

wow, you really think so? Thank you very much... I though I terribly failed since I wrote it in impulse... I'm really relieved because of what you said... Thank you again for reading...

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