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silverdoll14 ([personal profile] silverdoll14) wrote2012-03-21 02:03 pm

ONE SENTENCE DRABBLE SERIES 2: PART 3 - MY

Title: ONE SENTENCE DRABBLE SERIES 2: PART 3 - MY
Genre: AU, Romance, Angst, Action
Rating: PG
Pairing:  OhMiya
Author: Me 
Length – Words: Drabble – 100 words
Author’s notes: Another flashback and now you’ll have glimpse on how they ended up running away but I think you already figure it out ne? Part three is here and that means another 3 is left to go. 
Comments and criticisms are highly appreciated. Dozou~
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“Kill him…” That was the last instruction he got from his boss and Nino felt his world crumbling down on him.
Tears streamed freely from his eyes as he aimed his pistol at Ohno one night they were together in their love nest, thinking he was fast asleep. 
Suddenly, a hand grabbed him and they rolled into the bed until Ohno was over him. A smile was on Ohno’s face as he aimed Nino’s gun on his own heart.

The metal was dropped and a passionate kiss was shared.

Nino didn’t regret anything because it was his heart to follow.


[identity profile] jadoo-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 06:33 am (UTC)(link)
I'm totally in love with this part...I can't stop reading and reading it again !! T.T It's soo beautiful !!

With so few words you manage to transfert as many feeling as in a fic oh 10 chapter !!

So, yeah...like I said...I love this passage !! =3 I think I will read it every time I need a break !! ;D

Arigatoo nee !!

[identity profile] silverdoll14.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 07:01 am (UTC)(link)
eh? Hountoni? I'm afraid it's hard to understand since I need to to create a story within 100 words... but I'm glad it reached you...

You're welcome and thank you for taking your time in reading this... :D